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Nguyên văn bởi rangsun (Post 83506)

I eat and sleep much hours in day.
I often wake up early and use internet to chat, make friends. :regular_smile:

I spend many hours a day eating and sleeping.

I often wake up early and use the Internet to chat and make friends.

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Nguyên văn bởi lim (Post 83601)

Hi pà con,

I go to lqdlongan.com everyday for reading my friends' topic, chat chit on it...meet my beloved and sometime fighting with somefriends...hehe

Don't want to show up my not-good english ability by correction you all-my valued friends, but try to improve ourself (including me) with the foreigners' using:

1. I am very shy...===> I'm so shy...
2. flirt girl...===>flirt with girls (or I'd like to chit chat/ rapport with girls...)
3.girl's name===> female name.
4.This is a name of place, but a name of girls===> Myhanh is a name of a Vietnamese female hero and was named for a ward/ hamlet in Duc Hoa District in 1975, would you like me tell more about that?..
5.In vietnamese, the name does't have gender==>Vietnamese people names usually do not indicate the gender like others...
6. I eat and sleep much hours in day====> I eat and sleep much in daytime.

hehe, lots of ex LQD HS students are very good in English, please help me and others improve English, please!!!!

with love to my friends and happy new year!

I am sorry to rewrite some centences in your writing. I think the new centences are better than yours.

I access lqdlongan.com for reading my friends' topics, chatting on it ... "meeting" my beloved and sometimes fighting with some friends. (Can we use "meet" here?)

I feel difficult to understand your the second centence/phrase. I try rewriting it like this:
"Don't want to show up my not-good English ability by correcting my valued friends' writing, I only try to improve our English by using foreigners' writing styles".

female hero = heroine (not heroin)

Would you like me to tell about that more? (I'm not sure)

Vietnamese people's names usually .....

good at sth (not good in)

ex LQĐ HS students =

I am not good at English. I am not sure of what I write. Could you all take part in correcting our writing together in order to improve our English? Thank you very much!

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Nguyên văn bởi congvu (Post 83610)

I am sorry to rewrite some sentences in your writing. I think the new sentences are better than yours

I access lqdlongan.com for reading my friends' topics, chatting on it ... "meeting" my beloved and sometimes fighting with some friends. (Can we use "meet" here?): this is the correct E. grammar:thumbs_up:, mine is just used in talking...

I feel difficult to understand your the second sentence/phrase. I try rewriting it like this:
"Don't want to show up my not-good English ability by correcting my valued friends' writing, I only try to improve our English by using foreigners' writing styles".

female hero = heroine (not heroin): not common use

Would you like me to tell about that more? (I'm not sure)

Vietnamese people's names usually .....

good at sth (not good in): good in English is OK!

ex LQĐ HS students = High School

I am not good at English. I am not sure of what I write. Could you all take part in correcting our writing together in order to improve our English? Thank you very much!

The correct writing is up to the situation as formal or informal, but we have to use the correct TENSES in all case and try to use as same with the original E. speaking people as posible!

So the best way to learn E. is from Films, TV...if we don't have chance to communicate wiz E. mother speaking people.

And surely we can not translate E to Vietnamese and vice versa in all cases if we do not change our mindset the logical thingking, culture, eduacation...

i think that my speaking is better than writing (but my writing may be better than some English, American and Australian!!??????) hehe....

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Thanks for your reply!

... for reading, chat, meet, fighting ....: How about parallel?
... by correction you all my valued friends ...? (Could you explain it?)
... good in sth?

Sorry to correct your writing. I discuss with you to improve our English and make this forum more active although my English is not good.

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Nguyên văn bởi congvu (Post 83607)

I spend many hours a day eating and sleeping.

I often wake up early and use the Internet to chat and make friends.

I usually make friendship with everyone in Y! rooms chat. And it's so hard for me to find a kind person, really hard.
My day:

1. Going to school.
2. Eating.
3. Sleeping.
4. Going to the market and cooking.
5. Washing clothes.
6. Doing homework.
7. Chatting and listenning to music.

Sometimes I go out with friends, doing volunteer, ...v.v......

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Perhaps you are a adroit girl.hehe

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Nguyên văn bởi tieungaogiangho (Post 83670)

Perhaps you are a adroit girl.hehe

My dear, I'm a boy.
This is my life in HCMC.

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Nguyên văn bởi tranan1992 (Post 83672)

This is my life in HCMC.

Perhaps you should use lives better than life. Do you understands this !

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Nguyên văn bởi tranan1992 (Post 83660)

I am a kind person. (laugh... laugh... laugh). Could you make friend with me?

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Nguyên văn bởi congvu (Post 83675)

I am a kind person. (laugh... laugh... laugh). Could you make friend with me?

oh!You are a good brother.You are a good doctor.But you are not a kind person.Hổng tin đi hỏi mấy cô bồ cũ của đại ca thử xem.:wink_smile: hehe.